The whole thing is out of character! Why-- just look at this part here!
[You'd think Mephisto would be trying to hide the text or something, but oh no. He's going to go through line-by-line and make sure everyone knows that clearly this quill is writing him OOC and needs some crit on its HMD.]
[Because that's actually the only thing he's upset about here. Because clearly an in-character love poem written for God and everyone to see would be absolutely fine??]
It goes on for nearly three stanzas talking about how much I supposed suffered over my indecisiveness to tell her of my feelings-- and that's just nonsense! I never even planned on telling her in the first place! How could I have possibly agonized over a decision I'd already made!?
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[You'd think Mephisto would be trying to hide the text or something, but oh no. He's going to go through line-by-line and make sure everyone knows that clearly this quill is writing him OOC and needs some crit on its HMD.]
[Because that's actually the only thing he's upset about here. Because clearly an in-character love poem written for God and everyone to see would be absolutely fine??]
It goes on for nearly three stanzas talking about how much I supposed suffered over my indecisiveness to tell her of my feelings-- and that's just nonsense! I never even planned on telling her in the first place! How could I have possibly agonized over a decision I'd already made!?