milesedgelord: forehead kiss (pic#12069313)
milesedgelord ([personal profile] milesedgelord) wrote in [community profile] nysalogs 2019-01-27 04:59 am (UTC)

[The tips of his fingers traced over the underside of a breast, gently tracing the outline of them. He marveled at the softness of her skin. His face pressed against her hair and kissed it gently before cupping a breast in his hand, a thumb brushing against a nipple.]

It almost sounds as if you're stalling Phoenix.

[He peeked at him, over Annie's shoulder and gave him a smile. His other hands lay flat against her belly.]

Does this feel alright?

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